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ChatGPT's idiomatic translation of the poem:

Yu Xin’s was a life of utter desolation; in old age, his poems and rhapsodies stirred the riverlands.



Opus:

No life ran more bleak and desolate than Yu Xin's —

yet in his twilight years, his verses stirred the rivers and the passes.


  Yu Xin's past was exquisitely tragic
  Ages passed; now his works betray magic


I think the feminine rhyme sounds unintentionally comic.


I guess that works, it is always difficult to capture the cultural and linguistic melancholy of such poetry.




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